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20210421托福写作考题解析-王雨婷

作者:王雨婷 2021-05-07 11:58 来源:武汉编辑
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此次考察的话题属于托福综合写作考试中考频较高的动植物类大话题的缓解动植物数量减少的方法的子话题。在TPO中有大量材料也涉及到了相关话题,包括:TPO17, TPO18, TPO23,TPO37TPO42TPO48。因此,TPO同样仍旧是考生备战综合写作熟悉话题的重要资料。

 

Keywords: extinction, mating, live span, digestive system, female, male, reproduce, food source, bulk feeding.

 

可以类比下列这些TPO的综合写作。

TPO18 The Decline of Torreya

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总观点:Torreya即将灭绝,专家提出三种举措来解决数量减少的问题

• Reestablish Torreya in the same location where it thrived for thousands of years

• Move Torreya to an entirely different and faraway location

• Preserve Torreya in research centers.

听力反驳:

总观点:三个方法都没用

• 全球变暖引起了Torreya原始存在的地方的Florida整体气温上升,这导致了这个地区的wetland干燥,导致Torreya也无法在此地生存

• Torreya移动到新的地方可能会引发对于新环境的其他植物无法预计的伤害

• 研究室里的Torreya无法维持数量和基因的多样化,所以不能长期生存

 

TPO37 Turtle Excluder Device

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总观点:shrimp-fishing boat意外捕获在网里的endangered sea turtle可以通过TED来逃生,但是这种方法受到了批判。

• sea turtle被抓住的几率很低,并且TED会给shripm fisher带来大量损失

• 缩短允许shrimp boat的网在水下的时间限制是一种比TED更有效的方法

• TED对于大型的species of endangered sea turtle并不有效

听力反驳:

• 总论点:这些批判并不合理

• 美国有成千上万的shrimp boat, 他们或多或少会抓到sea turtlessea turtle目前的数量已经很少,保护他们比减少shrimp fisher的损失更重要

• 时间限制基本无法实施TED是一种更好管理的方式;

• 可以制造更大的TED在有需要的区域使用。

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题目解析:

这道题考察的是考频较高的教育类话题,考察的是大学专业选择,但是在具体题目中又涉及到了工作问题。TPO和历年真题中对于大学生选课方面的考察非常多,比如:201902242019090720201023。另外,这道题和20200829的真题非常的类似,一道考察大学生是否应该选择和高薪工作相关的专业,一道考察小学生是否应该选择重要的活动去参与。

该题是一道二选一类型的题目,因此考生在写作过程中要注意进行对比论证。

参考如下范文:

 

Decision-making can be considered as the most crucial factor for ones success: a appropriate one contributes to a triumph, while the vice versa. One of the determining decisions in life is the major to study in university. Some propose that whether the major can bring about a lucrative career is an important element to weigh, while I contend that choosing the major that interests one is better, and my reasons will be illustrated in the following paragraphs.

 

The interest in a major is the motivator to push one to explore the field both academically and in future career. Learning about an unfamiliar field in university is an quite energy-consuming and tedious process when students are forced to going through professional and hard-to-understand papers; carrying out complicated and difficult-to-operate experiment; not to mention that they also need to put abstract theory into practice in future career.Those obstacles may render those less mature youngsters to give up and waste their precious time in college. This is where the interest in the major works. When one finds a theory to be too obscure, it is his interest that stimulates him to find more references to boost his understanding; when he is faced with obstruction in future work, the interest comes as the encouragement to boost his performance. Take myself as an Example: as a student majored in English in university, I always found understanding English Grammar was a challenge because the language is full of exceptions in forms. However, my interest in linguistics pushed me to spend most of my time studying grammar books from different publishers and concluded linguistic phenomena from all the sources I could get, from formally published papers to TV series. Until now, the interest still pushes me to work hard in my career as an English teacher.

 

Some in favor of choosing the major that leads to profitable career may argue that only by earning sufficient money can one lead a cozy life and create desirable living environment for his family. However, they may ignore the fact that choosing the major that interests one does not necessarily mean that one could not make profit out of it. As a matter of fact, ones passion for his major or career can, in turn, create more profit. Well goes a Chinese ancient saying, There are three hundred and sixty trades, and every trade has its master. As the saying puts it, whichever field one works in, as long as he is willing to explore further and devotes more effort in to it, he can be proficient and play a leading role in the field, which makes any career rewarding ultimately. For example, a painter, though not being considered as rewarding major and career, can sell his work in a high price only if he is motivated to master skills to paint in university, turning his works into a unique and fancy ones. Conversely, a house real estate agent, which seems to be a lucrative career, may not make a fortune in the career, because he is not passionate over learning related skills on campus or promoting the house.

 

To put it in a nutshell, choosing the major that one is interested in is more important than the one leading to a profitable career because the former brings about passion to explore the field and also leads to promising future.


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