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托福写作20210109考情分析(杜薇)

作者:杜薇 2021-03-02 10:58 来源:武汉编辑
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本期的综合写作为自然科学生物话题,套路是综合阅读提出三种动物死亡的可能性,然后听力一一反驳,这种套路在TPO的综合写作练习中还是比较常见的。考生需要注意的是阅读和听力的一一对应性。

 

可以类比下列的TPO综合写作练习:

TPO29 Edmontosaur

READINGseveral arguments support the migration hypothesis

Point1: the diet

Point2: living in herds  

Point3: capable of migrating long distances

Listening: not migrating

Point 1: have enough nutrition both in the summer and in the winter

Point 2: other animals also live in herds such as Roosevelt Elk

Point 3: Juveniles are not capable of moving long distance

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题目解析:

此题是重复之前的旧题,话题分类属于政府类话题。从艺术的保护来看,国家应该支持艺术的发展。我们可以从国内和国际两个角度来拓展思路。国内来说,国家的支持有助于保护和发展传统文化,特别是现在传统文化不受年轻人的重视。从国际来看,文化是国家艺术的代表,支持文化发展可以树立国家的形象,提升国际影响力。

 

参考范文如下:

Thesis Statement:

Governments should provide financial support to artists.

 

As the cultural heritage of mankind, arts embody not merely human intelligence and creativity, but also unique traditions. Unfortunately, many people argue that compared with support for economy, arts should not be sponsored by government. In my opinion, this idea is biased and short-sighted. In order to pass arts down from generation to generation, arts should receive the government’s support.

 

To begin with, government support helps preserve traditional art form. Today, many legacies of our ancestors are facing a crisis due to the neglect of younger people. Taking Chinese traditional music as an example. Despite its history of thousands of years, young artists tend to show more passion in modern art forms including popular hip-hop and rap. Also, Popular music is often performed on many TV programs. The trend is that ethnic and minority music are put less and less emphasis by the public. It must be noted that traditional music genres such as Peking opera and minority music is precious intangible heritage. Therefore, government is obliged to invest in arts especially in traditional music, painting etc. If financial assistance arrives, some young painters might have the impetus to take up this traditional art form, and then more exhibitions will be held to attract people’s attention. Especially young people, they begin to cherish the essential qualities encompassed in traditional art and may even begin to give their own support.

 

Besides, given more official funds, national arts will have the opportunity to be accepted by the world. Outstanding artists or art groups might be sponsored on many international tours. They will be able to take advantage of these overseas travels to disseminate the essences and values of those arts and make them known to foreign friends. Once a traditional art form obtains renown abroad, its influence is considerably extended. Also, arts, as kind of representation for a country, help spread the national image all over the world. Take Beijing Opera as an instance. If such a national treasure could be shown to other nations, it can become a window for the outside world to understand the uniqueness of Chinese culture and value.

 

Diversified art forms should be recognized by the public. It is government’s responsibility to preserve art forms. As long as a dynamic and effective state sponsorship system could be built and further developed, artists will be inspired and art forms will be appreciated by all ordinary citizens in the nation.

(新航道武汉学校 北美考试院 托福写作组 杜薇

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