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5.9日雅思写作考试回顾
2015年05月11日 02:15
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5.9日雅思写作考试回顾

Tsak 1The table blow shows the salaries of secondary / high school teachers in 2009. Describe the main features of the figure.


表格:横行年份变化,纵列5个不同国家,数据内容教师薪资,单位pound,

时态过去时和过去完成时

表格特征:

前两列时间变化,写动态增减,最后一列静态,比大小(对比参考C6T2)

纵向归类特征更明显:起始年份和15年后数值由大到小依次为 L-A-D-K-J

列和第二列数据变化趋势相同

薪水峰值由大到小依次为K-J-L-A-D

引言段:题目改写

主题段:1.起始年份各国薪资比较L ,其次是A 和D,最少的是K 和J,分别代入数据。

        2.15年后五国薪资均有所增长,增幅各异,薪资排序无异。L仍然是最多的,其他国家的变化幅度,归类对比,代入数据。

        3.但是薪资峰值各国情况相异,K居首位,其次是J和L,最少的是A和D,分别为…

结尾段:五国薪资随时间变化都有增长,薪资峰值在各国情况相异


词汇词组:

initial figure /  begin/start with  / followed by  / ranked the third of  /  with…and… respectively/each  / (marginally/far)more / less than  /  had the lowest payment  / share an increasing trend  /  climbed by  /  a slight increase  /  remain/maintain to gain the largest amount  /  continue to be the second important country that…  / similarly, …still had the least number of…  / as for/in terms of the top salary, the situation was different  / ….


句型:

The figure in + 国家 + was + 数据 / + 增加/爬升 to +数据

There was a + adj. + n. (增长) of the salary in + 国家 / from… to…

A + adj. + n.(增长) was shown / obvious in + 国家 from…to…

A 15-year period had seen / witnessed / experienced a + adj. +n.(增长)

国家 had the greatest / slowest increase of teachers’ salary from…to…


Task 2  Development of technology cause environmental problems. Some people think people should choose a simpler way of life. Others think that we should use technology to solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your opinion.


题目分析:科技带来环境问题,解决问题的方式:选择简单的生活方式,还是运用科技发展自身解决。


注意:1. 限定科技发展对环境的影响,非对经济,文化,全球化等的影响

      2.两个部分都要讨论: 简单生活方式和科技发展本身解决环境问题


解题思路:
1.引言段:

引出话题:科技发展提高生活水平的同时,带来环境问题,是选择简单生活还是依赖科技自身解决。

表态:简单生活方式 + 科技解决双边并重
2.主题段:
1.因科技进步,人为造成的环境问题,应该选择简单生活方式:

低碳生活:公共交通代替私家车,减少汽车尾气

减少一次性消费品使用,减少难降解垃圾的问题

节约水电等能源,减少化学品造成的水污染
2.依托科技力量,改善环境问题:

开发清洁能源、新型能源、环保型能源

科技手段改善正在造成的污染,如工厂排放废气废水的预先处理

3. 结尾段

环境问题日益严峻,为了保护环境除了倡导简单的生活方式,还要依托科技力量改善环境问题。


词汇词组:

a trigger for environmental problems / simpler lifestyle / simplify our lifestyle / fight against the problem / equally significant / of equal significance / caused by/emerged from human activities / low carbon life / curb gas emission / carbon emissions/ greenhouse effect / global warming / disposable products / difficult to dispose of / hazardous material/chemicals / plastic bags / landfill / conserve energy / artificial laundry powder / chemical pollution / cleaner fuels /environmentally friendly /existing pollutant


句式:

… recycling household waste, reducing energy consumption such as water and electricity and taking more public transportation rather than driving around in private cars

… individuals’ participation is necessary and actually irreplaceable along with the advanced technology

It is a comprehensive task to tackle the environmental problems, which needs the coordination and cooperation of individuals and government.


同类话题:
1.Development in technology causes environmental problems. Some people think the solution in these problems is that everyone accepts a simpler way of life, while others say that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2009-02-12)
2.Some people think that developments of technology make people’s life more complex. But others believe that people should choose a simpler life without using technologies. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2012-02-18)

 

 

2015-05-09

T2 Development of technology cause environmental problems. Some people think people should choose a simpler way of life. Others think that we should use technology to solve these problems. Discuss both view and give your opinion.


Technology has been playing an essential part in enhancing living standard but meanwhile it is also a trigger for environmental problems. In order to tackle this alarmingly serious issue, it is suggested by many that simplified lifestyle should be a feasible solution while some others hold the best choice to fight against this problem is to resort to technology itself. I tend to place both as of equal significance.


Some of the environment-related problems emerged from human activities is to blame on advanced technology and it is important to prevent further environmental deterioration by means of living a simpler life with less involvement of technology. Firstly, living a low carbon life contributes to curbing global warming. For example, taking more public transportation rather than driving around in private cars helps, to some extent, reduce carbon emissions and greenhouse effect. In addition, minimizing the amount of disposable products is a good choice of leading a greener life. Instead of using some of these products like plastic bags, recyclable products will be much easy to dispose of and is unlikely to cause as much soil and water pollution. Moreover, it is possible to save waters from chemical pollution by using less artificial chemicals, since such pollutants, be them toxic or not, will exert negative impacts on the environment.


However, it does not mean that advanced technology itself is futile, especially in this fast-paced world. Quite the opposite, technology have to be utilizes to tackle environmental problems. On the one hand, cleaner fuels and new energy need to be developed. The technology is already available to produce electric cars that are environment friendly. On the other hand, technology should also be extended to deal with the existing pollutants released from various industries and factories, especially before the hazardous chemicals discharged into the atmosphere or into lakes and rivers.   


From the above discussion, it is not difficulty to draw a conclusion that it is a comprehensive task to tackle the environmental problems, and only through the joint effort of individuals’ participation in living a simpler life as well as making the utmost of the advanced technology, can environmental problems be solve more constructively.

 

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