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5.30日雅思写作考试回顾
2015年06月02日 09:40
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Task 2

Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures an

 

审题;

话题范围:社会生活(生活方式)与环境

题型:混合性 论证(分析对local cultures and environment的影响)+列举(solutions)(把后面的内容进行前置处理)

对问题的理解:How true is this statement? 可理解为或是改为To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

 

文章结构:4段式

首段:铺垫信息+(关注焦点)+表达观点

旅游业发展迅速,对目的地国在环境及当地文化方面产生不良影响。

主体段1对环境的具体影响/空气污染,垃圾污染,生态损害等    

主体段2对当地文化的具体影响/冲击当地的习俗和生活方式,甚至导致冲突   

结尾段:解决方法/于旅客,出发前做足功课,于旅游社,做好宣传和管理,于接待国,持宽容之态度理解文化差异

 

文章结构:5段式

首段:铺垫信息+(关注焦点)+表达观点

旅游业发展迅速,对目的地国在环境及当地文化方面产生不良影响。

主体段1对环境的具体影响/空气污染,垃圾污染,生态损害等    

主体段2对当地文化的具体影响/冲击当地的习俗和生活方式,甚至导致冲突   

主体段3解决方法/于旅客,出发前做足功课,于旅游社,做好宣传和管理,于接待国,持宽容之态度理解文化差异

结尾段:努力解决旅游业发展过程中出现的问题,更好地促进旅游业的发展。

 

Tourism is most likely popular activity at the moment. It generates a great deal of discussion as some people argue that the tourism has given detrimental effects on the destination country. It is as the environmental condition is decreased by the tourists. While it is undeniable cause and untold damage to local environment, I am personally convinced that travelers can do several things such as becoming an Eco-traveler, respecting local culture and traditions and Frugality in electricity use to reduce the negative effect on local tourism and environmental.

 

Admittedly, Tourism activities can give a drawback for a country. It occurs when traveling place is visited by tourists who damage the natural surroundings. The evidence of this case can be seen that environmental condition in Genting Highlands, one of traveling places in Malaysia, is damaged by a great number of visitors who visit the place throughout this year. As a result, an overwhelming majority of the land have erosion at the moment as the Genting’s visitors always litter the place regardless of the risk. Consequently, Malaysian government has spent over two million dollars to overcome the problem. It is clear that tourists have given disadvantage effects on the country which traveler visit to, although they actually can do a few things that can harmless to the nature when they holiday in one place.

 

Apparently, the travelers can do several activities which can decrease the harmful effect on environment and social culture. Firstly, the visitors who always visit new places for traveling should become an Eco-green traveler. For straightforward example, Eco-traveled people should not contaminate the water as it can impact on the nature surround them. Furthermore, they should use less plastic which can lead to deforestation. Secondly, people should be respect on the culture where they visit for holiday. Even though the local tradition is completely unusual for them, they should not disturb the local population. Lastly, the tourists can use frugally the electricity when they holiday. It can keep the environmental as the activity can save more energy. Therefore, those activities play an important role to keep tourism places from detriment.

 

 

In conclusion, traveling activities can damage environmental in a country, while several number of activities can reduce the damaging effects on local culture and environmental. Where possible government should control the tourism activities as it can anticipate the worst impact of the activity. 

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