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1月30日托福写作考情-曹优优

作者:曹优优 2021-03-01 17:33 来源:武汉编辑
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本场综合写作探讨了一项新科技的优缺点,关键词:pirate海盗, piracy海盗行为。科技类历年真题占比比较少,大家可以参考练习TPO中的这些科技话题综合写作:TPO9,TPO36,TPO37,TPO50,TPO52移居到小行星的可行性。

 

可以类比下列TPO综合写作

TPO9 hydrogen-based fuel-cell engine

阅读总观点:汽车使用氢燃料电池发动机比内燃机好

1.内燃机internal-combustion engine依靠的石油有限,而氢可再生;

2.使用氢气更环保因为副产品是水而不是二氧化碳;

3.使用氢能源更高效,汽车行驶同样的距离消耗的氢能源是消耗内燃机的一半;

听力反驳:

1.氢能源需要人工制造,生产和储存难度大;

2.生产过程中使用煤和天然气,会造成污染;

3.氢能源发动机需要用到稀有金属铂,价格昂贵,且目前没有好的替代品;

 

TPO37 Turtle excluder device

阅读总观点:放走海龟装置的缺陷

1.捕虾船很少捕到海龟,使用TED装置会让虾逃出渔网,金钱损失更大;

2.其他方法保护海龟更有效,方法之一是缩短把渔网放在水下的时间;

3.濒危的海龟个头太大以至于无法通过TED装置的通道逃走;

听力反驳:

1.捕虾船很多,每年捕捉到的海龟数量成千上万;

2.船很多,政府无法监督所有船是否遵从时间限制,而TED更容易实施;

3.TED装置可以更改设计,在大海龟生活水域可以用大的TED来保护他们;

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题目解析:

1月30日的独立写作真题是一道新题,小组领导在挑选成员时主要考察他们哪一项优点诚实,善于和同事打交道还是沟通能力。往年真题中有类似的探讨,例如政客们的沟通能力,诚实以及善于听取他人意见的品质,和培养小孩子诚实,助人为乐和组织的优点。这题三选一,常见写法是每个段落谈论一个选项。本文选择第三个选项,沟通能力最重要

 

Various qualities need to be taken into account when choosing teammates. If I were a group leader and recruiter, among honesty, social ability and communication skill, I would vote for communication skill as the required skill of my future coworkers.

 

First and foremost, communicating clearly is an extremely important factor in work place. When a staff fails to explain what his demands or problems are in a lucid way, other colleagues are tortured, a result of which is misunderstandings and even conflicts. What's worse, a team program whose goal does not really get across is doomed to fail since team work requires concerted efforts. Suppose that a manufacturing business manager sets a goal to provide high-quality products, but the secretary fails to pass on this information to all workers due to poor communication skill. As a result, all products are made of cheap materials. In this case, notoriety and bankruptcy is very likely to be around the corner.

 

Indeed, the ability to mingle with others do have advantages. In a group setting, if a newcomer knows how to socialize and quickly finds an appealing topic to start a conversation, he will fit in more smoothly. With an icebreaker, other colleagues will know at least a glimpse of the newcomer’s manners and personality and not feel uncomfortable or uneasy in greeting. However, good social skill is not indispensable when choosing a teammate since there are many stories or legends about those talents who are not gregarious but have made a great difference, among whom Albert Einstein is a good example. Introverted though he was, he changed the world through his innovative theory of relativity.

 

Finally, although honesty helps build trust in workplace, it is not a required quality. Generally, no one is willing to work with liars. Those who tend to tell lies are often treated with distrust and suspicion is the root cause of failure in a team project. However, hiding secrets is one kind of professional ethic, especially in industries which require confidentiality. For example, rules of confidentiality have to be abode by all lawyers and doctors. If a lawyer or doctor regards honesty as the best policy and discloses his clients’ private information to his family, he may face lawsuits. Thus, it is not justifiable for honesty to be the most important quality.

 

To put it in a nutshell, it is more rewarding and reasonable to give priority to communication skill rather than social skill and honesty when choosing teammates.

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