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Taking Stance – Format 4: Advantage and Disadvantage

Sample Question 1
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Somepeople live in one community for their entire lives. Many more move at leastonce, while others quite often.

What are the advantages and disadvantagesof these two different modes of life? Give your reasons and examples.     

Sample Question 1:Brainstorming

Key words

•Ÿ Community

•Ÿ ____________

Related issues

•Ÿ lifestyle

•Ÿ ____________

Positive Side

•Ÿ Enjoy better living environment

•Ÿ ____________

Negative Side

•Ÿ Parting with relatives and old friends

•Ÿ ____________

Sample Question 1:Essay plan

Main Body 1 - Topic Sentence

The most advantage to moving house isthat__________________________ However, there are alsodisadvantages___________________

Main Body 2 - Topic Sentence

Similarly, there are many benefits______________________________

Sample Essay 1:Introduction

S1 For manypeople, moving house is one of the vicissitudes of their lives and it happensfor various reasons: lower rent, a better job, brighter prospect, familymisfortune, and so on. S2 However, there are some people in the worldwho prefer to stick to their old houses and stay in one community for theentire course of their lives. S3 To my way of thinking, these twoopposite modes of life have their own merits and demerits.

Sample Essay 1: Mainbody 1

S1 The mostobvious advantage to moving house is that people can live in a new social andnatural environment, which is often safer, cleaner, more friendly and excitingthan that of their old neighborhood. S2 Living in a new community canalso be a new starting point in life for the migrants, who may find better jobsand brighter prospects there, the very reason that appeals to them in the firstplace. S3 Also, by making new acquaintances and building up new socialand business contacts, their horizons are vastly expanded and the result isthat they often find new meanings of life and achieve greater success than theycould possibly imagine in their hometown. S4 However, there are alsoinevitable disadvantages, such as the parting with relatives and old friends,the isolation from the local society and even the hostility of new neighbors,who may regard them as unwelcome outsiders or intruders.

Sample Essay 1: Mainbody 2

S1 Similarly,there are many benefits attached to sticking to one locale forever. S2Because a person’s old neighborhood is usually the place where he was born andgrew up, there must be a lot of old schoolmates, bosom friends and supportivefamily members who have close relationships with him and who are certain togive him assistance, encouragement and confidence in his hard times. S3 Moreover,by dwelling in one community from the cradle to the grave, people can enjoy astable and tranquil life and avoid the hidden dangers and hectic struggles ofventuring into unfamiliar surroundings. S4 Nevertheless, a majordrawback that often associates with never changing one’s domicile and socialenvironment is that life may become colorless and monotonous after many yearsof routine living. S5 More often than not, people will be engulfed insuch undesirable qualities as bigotry, prejudice and provincialism.

Sample Essay 1:Conclusion

S1 Inconclusion, pros and cons coexist in these two different lifestyles. S2Thus,when it comes to making decisions about moving and staying, it is not importantwhich one people opt for. S3 The only important thing is that they knowhow to live in an adaptive way and make judicious use of the resources in theirnew or old communities.

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